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08 August 2010 @ 04:38 pm
Prison Break - So, About Jane...  
Title: So, About Jane...
Author: clair_de_lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Lincoln/Jane
Category: Het
Rating: R
Word Count: ~ 520
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: So, there are a few things about Jane that make him... (Season 2)
Author’s Note: Written for rosie_spleen’s Bleeding Cuticles Challenge.

Thanks to mystressxoxo for the beta.
Long ago, I intended to write a Something About Jane ficlet that was supposed to be Lincoln/Jane and, somehow, became Sara/Jane. Go figure. Just finally making up to Linc here ;)

So, there are a few things about Jane that make him...

* *

She holds her ground and growls her irritation right in his face after he head-butted her. She barely takes the time to wipe her bleeding lip with the back of her hand before she straightens up and points an aggressive forefinger at him. He’s swiftly restrained and marched off by two goons, but her words, mood and intent are pretty clear.

She graciously accepts his short and silent apologies an hour later. No muss, no fuss, no hard feelings. He can’t actually be sure about the hard feeling part, but later that day, she kills for him, so he assumes the head-butting is already part of the past. She hardly knows him, and sure she kills for him for his father, but the guy is dead on the floor, Linc is alive, and Jane’s face merely contorts in slight regret.

When she brushes past him on her way out of the room, she smells of clean sweat, gun powder and sweet soap. She smells like a woman – except the gun powder, maybe – and it reminds him that it’s been a damn while.

The so pale skin of her cheeks doesn’t even flush a bit when she walks in on him in the bathroom; she crooks an eyebrow. He grabs a towel and protests, “Do you mind?” and she shakes her head – she’s fine, thanks for asking – suggesting for him to keep doing whatever it was he was doing. He does believe that she didn’t know he was in there, but she fucking doesn’t leave the room. He does believe that she was sincerely surprised to find him here, but she’s fucking staring at him, and the small towel is quickly becoming useless.

Then, the small towel is useless. Somehow, they’ve moved and she’s stripped out of her clothes. She’s gripping the edges of the sink, holding his gaze through the mirror and grinding her ass into him. When he looks down, his eyes fall on the generous and strong curves of her backside, and when he looks up, he can watch himself in the mirror, palming and squeezing her breasts. She smirks and licks the thumb he strokes gently on her swollen lip.

He probably asks her why she’s doing this, why she has agreed to do this, because her smirk widens. She twists her arm behind her, grips his buttock and kneads.

“I have a secret for you, Lincoln,” she says wickedly, her voice reeking of fake mystery. She clenches and unclenches rhythmically around him, meeting each of his thrusts in a way that’s going to make him come sooner rather than later. He gasps both in pleasure and in anticipation of her answer. Too much, too fast, too hard after too long. He’s pretty sure she won’t be mad at him if he’s a bit rough. “Women like to get laid too.”

He grins. Rough it is.

* *

So... there are a few things about Jane that will make him miss her when she drives away with his son in the backseat of her car.


--Comments are always welcome.
Current Mood: blahblah
E. Chance Woods: sucre holds the fencee_chance_woods on August 8th, 2010 06:40 pm (UTC)
I'd forgotten all about Jane! I remember watching those few episodes and hoping they'd go somewhere with the whole Lincoln/Jane thing, so thank you for taking me back in time and handling that.

This is a fantastic snapshot of a sexually confident woman, written so enticingly without making her into some kind of exploited, slightly distasteful toy (like, unfortunately, so many other het fics manage to do being the pretense of writing a sexually~evolved!female character). You've pulled it off beautifully, and crowned your achievement with the fantastic line, "Women like to get laid too."

Too right, Jane! :D
dani101: BSG-Laura-the lookdani101 on August 9th, 2010 12:09 pm (UTC)
great fic! I always loved the tension between these 2.
Clair de Lune: pb - lincoln janeclair_de_lune on August 9th, 2010 03:26 pm (UTC)
They had great chemistry *nods*
Thank you!
Clair de Lune: pb - janeclair_de_lune on August 9th, 2010 03:26 pm (UTC)
I think a lot of peole hoped that too. Instead, we got Lincoln/Sofia - and I'm not going there or I'll bug you forever about how dumb and wrong this was :-p

Jane didn't strike me as someone who would have let Lincoln treat her in such a way - admitting Lincoln would have tried, which... no - or shied away from what she wanted.

On a personal level, if I'm caught making a female character this kind of "toy" without a reason, I hope to be told so I can slap myself in the face ;)

Too right, Jane! :D

Pretty much the same reasons than Lincoln - minus maybe the three years of abstinence ;)
sassy, classy, and a bit smart-assy: Janebadboy_fangirl on August 8th, 2010 10:23 pm (UTC)

I so love them, and this is just awesome. I'd quote you my favorite parts, but it would just be a C&P of the whole 500 words. So great.

They so missed the boat with her. She was a GREAT character. Fifteen minutes of screen time and the fics it's spawned...just unreal.
Clair de Lune: pb - janeclair_de_lune on August 9th, 2010 03:27 pm (UTC)
*shuts down bubbling Lincoln/Sofia rant* Yes. They missed the boat indeed. Not only in connection with Lincoln, by the way: she could have been a great addition to the "let's take down the company" team in the last season. But two women in the same team? And why bother with the pesky previous events? What crazy ideas.

Ahem. What I meant was, I'm so glad you liked it ;)
happy is as happy does: Jane P. - PB (miss like whoa)happywriter06 on August 9th, 2010 06:08 am (UTC)
*happy sigh* I love everything about this especially the first three paragraphs after the first *. Such fitting descriptions.
Clair de Lune: pb - lincoln janeclair_de_lune on August 9th, 2010 03:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks a lot :) Sadly, those three little paragraphs are pretty much everything we saw on screen with the two of them...
Maz (or foxxy!): Hot Muchtuesdaeschild on August 9th, 2010 08:48 am (UTC)
Jane was always the woman for Lincoln. He needed a strong woman and Jane was it...how could the PB Powers That Be But Weren't have missed the boat with these two?!!

And how perfectly you brought them together, dear?!! Way to get maximum impact from around 500 words!! :)

Clair de Lune: pb - janeclair_de_lune on August 9th, 2010 03:28 pm (UTC)
Don't start me, I'm trying hard not to rant (too much) *g*

See? Short fic. Hardly edited and made fat. I can do it - just not too often. Too bad you didn't beta that one *iz evil*

Thank you, Foxy *squishes you*
Genevieve: brothers S4 by sezmsgenevieve on August 11th, 2010 11:36 am (UTC)
Gah, where have my Jane icons gone?

I love this pairing very much, and it's been so long since I read a Linc/Jane fic and this is just so good and now I'm babbling because SHE WAS AWESOME AND THEY JUST WASTED HER. *breathes*

Gorgeous fic, thank you!
Clair de Lune: pb - janeclair_de_lune on August 11th, 2010 03:53 pm (UTC)
One of the many things (or persons) they FAILED at. Ahem. I must be cautious, the start of a rant is never very far...

Thanks ;)