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09 June 2009 @ 10:10 pm
Prison Break - In a Few Words... (3)  
Title: In a Few Words... (3)
Author: clair_de_lune
Characters: Lincoln/Sara
Category: Het
Rating: R
Word Count: 100 + 60
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: Ten categories, ten words.
Author’s Note That microfic thing is a bit addictive... *facepalm*

Microfic meme: try to write different categories of fic (angst, fluff, UST, romance... can you think of others?) in ten words or less.

The resident attending to Michael was hot – like really hot...

She dreamt of Lincoln dying in the Chair too often.

Lincoln’s heart always beats slightly too fast under her stethoscope.

First time
Up against the wall in his cell... Soft, desperate, unforgettable.

She enjoyed their little stunt in Vegas way too much.

He gingerly brushes Sara’s shoulder and shivers when she collapses.

The thought of Michael finding out is appallingly, terribly fascinating.

She head-butted him once. Hours later, it still fucking HURT.

Fingers, lips and tongue – his touch makes her arch wantonly.

Eventually, he agreed to teach her the origami crane thing.

* *


DeathFic: She knows she can’t save them all. She just wishes...

UST: Damn golden bikini. He means... fucking damn golden bikini.

UST: If he could button up his shirts, it would help.

First time: Against the wall in his cell... First time, last time.

Hurt/Comfort: He wraps his arms around her and watches her collapse.

Hurt/Comfort: He wraps her in his arms and gently rocks her.
Current Mood: productiveproductive
Tori: pb | bleak | always on the runtorigates on June 9th, 2009 09:50 pm (UTC)
These are super lovely!
Clair de Lune: pb - sara3clair_de_lune on June 10th, 2009 01:19 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much :D
tokenblkgirltokenblkgirl on June 9th, 2009 11:03 pm (UTC)
These are awesome. :D I think First Time is my favorite.
Clair de Lune: pb - lincolnclair_de_lune on June 10th, 2009 01:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you :)
I was intially considering writing a Lincoln/Gretchen one (now, writing fluffly Linc/Gretchen would be a challenge *g*) but apparently... it turned out differently.

Edited at 2009-06-10 01:21 pm (UTC)
luv_faith_dream on June 10th, 2009 05:48 pm (UTC)
Very lovely:) The First Time and the first Hurt/Comfort Out-take are my favorites:) but all of them really bring across the right emotion and that in 10 words-wow!
Clair de Lune: pb - lincoln saraclair_de_lune on June 11th, 2009 08:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you :D Trying to tell as much as possible in ten words is... challenging but fun. Glad it worked for you!
sassy, classy, and a bit smart-assy: SaraMikeLincbadboy_fangirl on June 12th, 2009 05:11 am (UTC)

But humor is top notch as well.

And I like angst too because I'm naughty.
Clair de Lune: pb - lincoln2clair_de_lune on June 13th, 2009 07:40 pm (UTC)
I've realized something about 'Humor': we don't really know who's hurting. I guess it can work either or even both ways :-p

'Angst' is very, very wrong *g* I wouldn't want to write the actual fic but hinting at it here... is wrong in the right way.
sassy, classy, and a bit smart-assy: LincSaraholdbadboy_fangirl on June 13th, 2009 07:50 pm (UTC)
Oh, I saw the humor one as Linc's POV. I just don't imagine Sara saying "fucking HURT" with the same bemusement. *g*

As for angst, I always saw that when I was writing my Michael/Vee stories, that Michael, anyway, wanted Lincoln to find out in a macabre sort of way. I could see the same being true of Lincoln with Sara. It's the alpha male instinct, I think.
Clair de Lune: pb - brothers5clair_de_lune on June 14th, 2009 12:48 pm (UTC)
It was supposed to be Linc's POV but since I switched from one microfic to another, I've realized a bit too late that it may be confusing. That being said, you definitely have a point about the kind of language they would, or wouldn't, use *g*

I agree with you. And aside from the 'competition' between the two of them, I tend to think that there would have been a element of revenge/punishment in Michael wanting Lincoln to find out (he was quite superior and angry with Lincoln, pre-series), whereas it would be be more about guilt and confessing for Lincoln.
Melly: Sarah eyes closedmelanyebaggins on June 12th, 2009 05:52 am (UTC)
*wants longer fics to go with them*

Clair de Lune: pb - lincoln saraclair_de_lune on June 13th, 2009 07:40 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much :D
I don't plan on expanding any of these right now, but you never know!