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04 January 2009 @ 07:26 pm
Prison Break - Unwrapping Possibilities  
Title: Unwrapping Possibilities
Author: clair_de_lune
Characters: Lincoln/Gretchen
Spoilers: Season 4, episode 16.
Category: Het
Rating: R
Word Count: 200
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Author’s Note: Written for pbhiatus_fic’s 2009 Hiatus Challenge #1: Dirty Double Drabbles.


He does a double take when she puts the offer on the table – she can’t seriously think he’s dumb enough to buy it. Yet, something in her expression, beneath her smirk makes memories of aggressive flirting unravel; the memories unwrap half a dozen of possibilities, none of them too benevolent.

He could push her down on her knees and wipe that smirk off her face.

He could get down on his knees and discover how lewdly she begs when properly handled.

He could turn down the offer without a second thought – well, maybe not, actually.

He could nail her to the nearest wall and leave her disheveled and unsatisfied.

He could spread her on the table and fuck her with a disgusting, unbearable softness.

He could bend her over the couch with her ass poking in the air and revel in her uncertainty about his next action.

For a fleeting second, it doesn’t matter whether she wants to screw him literally or metaphorically or even both at the same time. It’s just about spilling in the most primitive way the mixture of repulsion and lust she elicits, and he’s tempted to take on her offer just to enjoy her reaction.

= = =


Jan 4, 2009

NB: This is unbeta’ed and counts exactly 200 words. If any mistakes mess with my word count, let’s be clear, I’m going to cry – still, let me know ;-)
 
 
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tokenblkgirl: Prison Break:Gretch and Lincolntokenblkgirl on January 4th, 2009 06:33 pm (UTC)
*dies*

Oh, this was just....and the..against the wall? *fans self as the mental picture takes hold*

I loved this, especially because it's Linc weighing his options with regard to taking her up on her offer. And it's not just lust (though that's a big part of it) but a power struggle between them and his need to beat her in some way. Awesomeness.

God, I'm starting to seriously ship these two (I've a bad habit of doomed ships). Thanks so much for writing this. :) *runs off to read again*

Clair de Lune: pb - gretchenclair_de_lune on January 4th, 2009 09:43 pm (UTC)
I kind of 'mary-sued' here (err, only in the first sentence, let's be clear) because Lincoln's reaction was initially my reaction. I wondered if she was being serious or if she was trying to ploy him or both.

I'm starting to seriously ship these two
They're fun to ship :-p In a sick, twisted way, at least.

And thanks so much :D
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Clair de Lune: origami - canardclair_de_lune on January 4th, 2009 09:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

it counts exactly 200 words, that's right

*nods proudly*
Paradoxically, Lincoln and Grechen behaved. I'm still tweaking a Michael/Sara one: apparently, 200 words aren't enough for them ^^

Edited at 2009-01-04 10:49 pm (UTC)
sassy, classy, and a bit smart-assy: Gretchen thumbs upbadboy_fangirl on January 4th, 2009 08:45 pm (UTC)
Oh, dear God. And I just got home from church! *fans self*

The only error I see, is that *revels* should just be revel. That shouldn't change your word count!

Also, would it be wrong to think I might have had a hand in this *inspiration* for you??? *evil grin*
Clair de Lune: pb - lincolnclair_de_lune on January 4th, 2009 09:25 pm (UTC)
Oh, dear God. And I just got home from church! *fans self*
It really shouldn't but this made me laugh *g*

You certainly can feel guilty about this one ;) The surrounding Lincoln/Gretchen finally got to me. I had the basic layout for the fic (aka Linc's options) but was too lazy to write it. The challenge at pbhiatus_fic was the last straw because seriously, 200 words? Can do.

Thanks :D (and thanks for the typo too - I fixed it.)
the wrong bitch: it's called 'unresolved sexual tension'coffee_mill on January 4th, 2009 10:03 pm (UTC)
*gulps*
*re-reads*
*re-re-reads*
*dies happily*

I simply love it. It's hottttt, smart and totally in character. It perfectly shows the struggle between these two.
Amazing job, srsly *goes to re-re-re-read*.
Clair de Lune: pb - lincolnclair_de_lune on January 5th, 2009 12:19 pm (UTC)
We can tell that Linc's affection for Gretchen is oozing here *smirks*

Thanks for the (multiple) reads and your comment ;-)
Rosie: Jodie - slicerosie_spleen on January 4th, 2009 11:52 pm (UTC)
He could get down on his knees and discover how lewdly she begs when properly handled.

Ohhh. Fabulously wicked and nice. Love the Lincoln thoughts pulsing through his brain; leaves a lot to the imagination while being very obvious at the same time.

I love this challenge, don't you? lol Thanks for this.
Clair de Lune: pb - gretchenclair_de_lune on January 5th, 2009 04:27 pm (UTC)
Subtlety in the obviousness, I guess *g*
Anwyay it's the great... awful... great... thing about those drabbles, you have to choose carefully what you say. I rarely manage to write them if there's not a challenge because I'm weak and eventually write more. Hence, me loves this challenge.

*clears throat* Would you mind it terribly if I friended you?
Rosie: Linc cuterosie_spleen on January 5th, 2009 10:34 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I am often too wordy as well.

I would love to friend you too. I hope I haven't been intimidating - in that you had to *clear throat*? If so, sorry.

Hope you don't mind me friending too.
Clair de Lune: pb - teamclair_de_lune on January 5th, 2009 10:53 pm (UTC)
No, absolutely not! It's just that I'm never sure how to do with this friending thing. Not asking may be rude, and asking makes it awkward to refuse.
Anyway... thanks and friended you :)
Rosie: caroline lolrosie_spleen on January 5th, 2009 11:03 pm (UTC)
I feel the same. It's awkward and unusual.

Thank goodness that's over, LOL
danni18danni18 on January 5th, 2009 02:28 am (UTC)
Very gritty and sexy, so fit the scene as well as it fir Linc
Clair de Lune: pb - lincolnclair_de_lune on January 5th, 2009 04:29 pm (UTC)
Lincoln was a bit blunt here, wasn't he? :-p
Thanks a lot for the comment!
ambassador of kwan: PB→ [brothers] the heart of the storyabvj on January 5th, 2009 03:47 am (UTC)
This was fantastic! Very sexy. Very THEM. I loved it.
Clair de Lune: origami - canardclair_de_lune on January 5th, 2009 04:29 pm (UTC)
I glad you found it to your liking. Thanks for reading :D