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12 August 2013 @ 03:31 pm
Word by word, I'll complete the damn thing.  
In Story of Faith - which is not a crossover, let's be clear - I have:

1- A rather shady facility located in Delaware;
2- A smart-assy Mrs. Jamison;
3- A mention of an evil Dr. Bowman;
4 & 5- A mention of a company named Lockhart & Pearson.

References 1 to 3 are from the same TV show. References 4 and 5 are from two other ones.
I'd say, let me know if you figured it out, but I'm not sure there's anyone left out there o_O

Also, almost 27.800 words written, and I still/only have around ten months to write, knowing the story is supposed to happen within the span of four years or so. I'm going to finish it. Someday. After all, I've only been working on it for two years ;)
 
 
 
Maz (or foxxy!): Cute bunnytuesdaeschild on August 12th, 2013 05:11 pm (UTC)
While I'm not good at spotting the references I'm still out here and you know I'll be pushing you all the way to the end, don't you?!! In the nicest way, of course! :)

It seems to me those ten months are likely to be really crucial. And welcome?!!

*hugs*
Clair de Lune: origami - canardclair_de_lune on August 12th, 2013 05:51 pm (UTC)
That's the cutest bunny ♥

The references are to shows you don't watch - at least, I don't think so - not to mention that for # 2 and 3, you need to know the show rather well :-p

I'll be pushing you all the way to the end, don't you?!!

*hugs*

It seems to me those ten months are likely to be really crucial.

On Michael's side, things are moving forward and I roughly know where I'm going, though on Sara and Lincoln's... not as obvious :-p
Maz (or foxxy!): PB bunnytuesdaeschild on August 13th, 2013 05:44 pm (UTC)
There was a whole bunch of the cute bunnies I downloaded a long time ago...including the one above which I always thought of as a PB bunny!! ♥

*hugs back*

though on Sara and Lincoln's... not as obvious :-p

If you want to bounce a few ideas around in The Lounge feel free! :)
Clair de Lune: divers - so cuteclair_de_lune on August 13th, 2013 07:09 pm (UTC)
I remember! I think I got this one *points to icon* from the same place.

I can't bounce ideas, I don't have anyyyyyyyyy *cries* That being said... It bothers me that I'm not including Lincoln more in the story - as in 'we only see him in relation to Sara, which was so NOT the plan initially'. As for what could happen, of course, I have to close the *cough cough* with R***** and dwell on a couple of things I've started. You know, I will bug you in the Lounge at some point *hugs*

Edited at 2013-08-13 07:09 pm (UTC)
Maz (or foxxy!): Nice cup of bunnytuesdaeschild on August 14th, 2013 09:49 am (UTC)
Yes, I have that one too! I think I downloaded a whole damn warren of them! They're so adorable. :)

Oh. No, bouncing ideas isn't possible when you have none...but when you do you might try bouncing?!! ;)

I do understand your point about not too much Lincoln. Did we once discuss Lincoln's feelings about R*****? Yes, again, it's in relation to Sara but...Maybe you need a whole chapter about Lincoln's feelings concerning his mother, his brother and his son? This man was the reason for it all so he is pretty important. Maybe the end of that part might come down to how he feels about accepting the possibility of Sara having a new relationship? Just as a kind of footnote, of course.

Yes, I know you will bug me in The Lounge at some point. *g* But isn't it good to have a place just for PB and us? *hugs back*
Clair de Lune: divers - heartsclair_de_lune on August 14th, 2013 06:57 pm (UTC)
Bunnies and kittens. I mean, what would the internet look like without bunnies and kittens?!

Thinking of it, in the first chapters, I *had* Lincoln's POV. Not as much as Sara's or Michael's but still. And then, I lost it. I need to go back and see how I can fix this, but I don't know what to do with Lincoln. The problem is, I'm not really interested in writing LJ and Sofia - but telling how things are going with LJ and Sofia would be a way to show how Lincoln cops with the loss of his brother...

I've been addressing Lincoln's take on R... through Sara's POV, or at best through omniscient narrator's POV *sobs*

I'd prefer to 'sprinkle' Lincoln in the various chapters. I'm afraid I'd make sound a chapter devoted to him like "oh, and by the way, Linc's around". I want to make the three of them - Michael, Sara and Lincoln - equal(ish) in the story... So, yep, I need to go back and see how I can add his POV and his side of the things.

*hugs*
Maz (or foxxy!): Bunny-under-the-duvettuesdaeschild on August 15th, 2013 09:43 am (UTC)
The internet would look cold and hard without the fluffiness of bunnies and kitttens, wouldn't it? And that little kittie in your icon is adorable! ♥

The problem is, I'm not really interested in writing LJ and Sofia - but telling how things are going with LJ and Sofia would be a way to show how Lincoln copes with the loss of his brother...

I do understand that...LJ was kind of important but this romance with Sofia wasn't. But yes, it would help shine the light on Lincoln and his progress and at least we know that LJ is going to be devasted too.

I've been addressing Lincoln's take on R... through Sara's POV, or at best through omniscient narrator's POV *sobs*

*hands you a hankie* Don't cry!! But Lincoln's views on R... did need to be addressed, didn't they?

I'd prefer to 'sprinkle' Lincoln in the various chapters. I'm afraid I'd make sound a chapter devoted to him like "oh, and by the way, Linc's around". I want to make the three of them - Michael, Sara and Lincoln - equal(ish) in the story....

The idea of 'sprinkling' Lincoln (notwithstanding the cuteness of that concept) is a very good one! I see it as Michael and Sara making up the basis of the outfit with Lincoln providing the accessories. Fanciful - but you know what I mean, right? :)

Edited at 2013-08-15 09:44 am (UTC)
Clair de Lune: ecriture3clair_de_lune on August 18th, 2013 11:06 am (UTC)
Kittens and bunnies make everything better *nods*

I checked the previous chapters last night and, actually, leaving Lincoln out of the story, is a rather recent issue. Going back and adding a few of scenes with his POV sounds doable, and I have a couple of ideas so yay! I just need to... write them now ;)
Maz (or foxxy!): Bunny-under-the-duvettuesdaeschild on August 18th, 2013 01:13 pm (UTC)
They certainly do. :)

Going back and adding a few of scenes with his POV sounds doable, and I have a couple of ideas...

*high fives* Up for cheerleading duties if required!