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13 June 2009 @ 09:57 pm
Prison Break - Five Minute Interlude  
Title: Five Minute Interlude
Author: clair_de_lune
Characters: Michael/Sucre, references to Michael/Lincoln and Michael/Sara
Category: Slash
Rating: R
Word Count: ~ 805
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: It takes Sucre three seconds to make his move after Lincoln has closed the car’s door and turned on his heels to jog a few yards away.
Author’s Note: This is a companion piece for On the Fence. Many thanks to tuesdaeschild for the beta.


It takes Sucre three seconds to make his move after Lincoln has closed the car’s door and turned on his heels to jog a few yards away. Shuffling to the center of the back seat, he wriggles a shoulder and about half of his upper body into the gap between the front seats and leans in. It has to be a rather uncomfortable position, bent at the waist, butt in the air and balance quite precarious, but it does bring him closer, and Michael can’t help enjoying the contact. Next thing he knows, a hand is cupping his jaw to firmly tilt his head, and a mouth is crashing on his. They’ve done this, and other things, quite a few times but rarely to Sucre’s impulse because Sucre, madre de Dìos, doesn’t do men – usually.

Michael feels his stomach twist because he knows why Sucre took the initiative this time around. There are grumbles about how wrong what they’ve been doing for weeks is, murmurs about Maricruz and Sara, gasps about Lincoln coming back any second and kicking Sucre’s ass if he ever finds out that Sucre has been banging his baby brother – and, for the record, the other way around. The part about Lincoln blowing a gasket makes Michael smile a bit sadly for reasons Fernando couldn’t even begin to fathom.

What there is not, is condolences, questions about how Michael’s feeling or words of comfort, though. This is comfort. This is why Sucre started it.

Well, comfort, and... “I’ve fucking missed this so much, Papi.”

Michael chuckles. “We were doing exactly this a few days ago and it’s not like we haven’t had other things to focus on in the meantime.”

“Whaddaya want, it’s addictive.”

It is. The emotional and physical closeness, the simplicity, the absence of shame, the light. Kissing Sara in the infirmary left him riddled with remorse; the not-quite-kisses he stole from Linc years ago were marred with darkness; the women and occasional men he had in his life... never were in his life, just passed by, because he closed himself to them. Sucre may feel guilty for what’s been going on – Michael doesn’t.

He drags Sucre back to him.

The kiss is sloppy because Sucre profusely, nervously licked his lips before starting it, but it remains superficial and gentle – just closed, wet lips pressed against Michael’s dry and slightly chapped ones. It’s Michael who opens up, Michael who darts out his tongue and seeks Sucre’s, Michael who keenly shifts in his seat to get and offer better access. Things heat up then, and they reach a whole new notch when Michael tips his head back. While he lets Sucre lap at his lips and tongue into his mouth, he busies himself with slipping a hand under the t-shirt of the other man. Fingers creep up on skin moist with sweat, smooth and golden; they graze a nipple, pinching and soothing it alternately, before skimming down over strained muscles as far as Michael can reach. It’s answered with a sharp intake of air. Pleased with this reaction, Michael pushes his advantage, whispering right against Sucre’s lips about stroking, sucking, swallowing and, with a wicked smile, bending over the hood. Sucre’s teeth are suddenly digging into his lower lip in retaliation. They worry it viciously and Michael groans his satisfaction – he revels in the rough nipping, in the strangled moan that Sucre spills into his mouth, in the way Sucre surrenders and pleads, “Shit, Michael! Don’t do that! Not now.”

“You started it,” he replies, all taunting smile and teasing fingers.

“And if your brother finds out, I won’t ever have the chance or, you know, the equipment to finish it.”

This brings back untimely desires and memories – but he can’t, shouldn’t and won’t have Lincoln whereas Sucre is here and getting under his skin in this easy, peaceful way that he noticed too late to do anything about. The retort, the constant concern amuses him, too, because Fernando really has no idea... “Don’t worry about Linc,” he says.

He kisses him again, quick and so dirty that Sucre gasps either in shock or excitation, possibly both, and disentangles the embrace to push him back in his seat.

It took Sucre three seconds to make his move when Lincoln left the car; it takes him less than one to retreat to his seat when Lincoln slides back behind the wheel.

They groped and kissed and teased – Michael dirty-talked to him, Sucre would say – for five minutes.

It takes Michael about an hour to calm down his arousal. An hour and, because he keeps shifting in his seat, Lincoln’s falsely stern, genuinely complicit and slightly sarcastic remark that if he needed some time alone to piss or whatever, he should have taken care of it when they stopped an hour ago.

-End-


May 30, 2009
 
 
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Clair de Lune: pb - sucreclair_de_lune on June 14th, 2009 06:22 pm (UTC)
Hi! It's the comment you left on the 'sister' fic, On the Fence, a couple of weeks ago that made me want to write this one, so... thanks a lot. Twice ;-)
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tokenblkgirl: Prison Break: Gentokenblkgirl on June 14th, 2009 12:46 am (UTC)
This was brilliant. I had no idea how much I enjoy Michae/Sucre until I read this. Now I want more. :)
Clair de Lune: pb - michael sucreclair_de_lune on June 14th, 2009 06:23 pm (UTC)
Um *I* don't even ship them :-p The initial fic, On the Fence, had been written on prompt, and this one... because someone left a comment that made me feel like writing a companion piece. But usually, I don't "see" any Michael/Sucre, even though I've written a few stories for this pairing and enjoyed doing it.
It's nice to help you consider something I don't believe in. Weird, but nice ;-)

Edited at 2009-06-14 09:05 pm (UTC)
Adommy-Fangirl: Prison Break - MiSu *Together again*bm_shipper on June 14th, 2009 11:01 am (UTC)
Wow, that was great :D hehe :D I simply love them :D
Clair de Lune: pb - michael sucreclair_de_lune on June 14th, 2009 06:24 pm (UTC)
How not to love the two of them? ;-)
I'm happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for commenting!
Maz (or foxxy!): You and me forevertuesdaeschild on June 14th, 2009 02:50 pm (UTC)
This really feels like a piece of happiness that Michael needn't feel guilty about and that's what makes it so sweet for me.

And even if Sucre doesn't usually do men Michael Scofield isn't your usual man, right? :)
Clair de Lune: pb - michael3clair_de_lune on June 14th, 2009 06:25 pm (UTC)
*nods* Sara and Maricruz set aside, it's rather easy to picture, and describe, them in a light and happy manner.

And even if Sucre doesn't usually do men

I'm rewatching the first season. Sucre's reaction when Michael first wants to put the sheet up... it had to find its way one way or another into the ficlet :-p
Maz (or foxxy!): Papi Loves Nandotuesdaeschild on June 15th, 2009 09:35 am (UTC)
Sucre's reaction when Michael first wants to put the sheet up... it had to find its way one way or another into the ficlet :-p

It fitted perfectly! :)
Clair de Lune: divers - lolclair_de_lune on June 15th, 2009 04:22 pm (UTC)
Um, Michael and Sucre South Park style? Looks like you found the way to save other avatars from that website *g*
Maz (or foxxy!): Papi Loves Nandotuesdaeschild on June 18th, 2009 10:09 am (UTC)
This icon was made by chanchito! Now she also has the site I found so she's getting more inventive! But yes, I've been able to save them now...and isn't it childish how happy that makes me?!! *g*
Jackie: Brad and Sucreyougottaletmego on June 14th, 2009 03:14 pm (UTC)
This was my first time reading a Michael/Sucre slash...I didn't think I'd enjoy it but I TOTALLY did. You did a great job, as always. I love your writing <333
Clair de Lune: pb - michael3clair_de_lune on June 14th, 2009 06:25 pm (UTC)
Oh, really? I'm flattered you decided to give it a go then :)
To be honest, as far as slash is concerned, I'm a Michael/Lincoln girl, but I have to admit that Michael/Sucre would be a lot healthier ^_^

Thanks for commenting!
Jackie: Mike/Linc: Michael's Choiceyougottaletmego on June 14th, 2009 11:53 pm (UTC)
Michael/Lincoln slash is super hot. Hahaha. I never considerd writing slash but now that I've written a Gretchen/Sara and a Gretchen/Sara/Kellerman, I'd say it's about time I give Michael/Lincoln a go. :)

Michael/Sucre is adorable. Seriously. Sucre's just adorable. I love him. <3

Great job :)
Clair de Lune: pb - brothers4clair_de_lune on June 15th, 2009 04:26 pm (UTC)
I've written tons of Michael/Lincoln *facepalm* and a bit of F/F slash (mostly Sara/Jane and one Gretchen/Sofia) but I've never been able to bring myself to write Sara/Gretchen.

Michael/Lincoln slash is super hot.
In a wrong, wrong way :-p

I'd say it's about time I give Michael/Lincoln a go.
*gently pushes you in the wrong yet right direction*

Sucre's just adorable
*nods* I think one of the most upsetting moments for me is when he's so badly beaten up at the end of S3. Beating up Sucre is like... kicking a cute little puppy, something like that.
Jackie: Mike/Linc Hug: Executionyougottaletmego on June 15th, 2009 04:42 pm (UTC)
I'll have to check out some of your Michael/Lincoln stuff. :) I really didn't think I would EVER write slash but after fangirling and becoming obsessed with the idea of Gretchen/Sara...I had to. It was interesting but I'm totally happy with how it came out.

Oh yes all slash is super wrong but so right at the same time!

Yes I definitely think I'll give Michael and Lincoln a go. I've been so bad about updating my fics lately! I just updated my "baby"/favorite story last night for the first time in weeks. I've been meaning to post it on lj but now that it has like 30 something chapters...it would take me forever. I'm really bad about posting my fics on lj, most of them just go straight to prisonbreakfic.net You're a member there, right? I think I've seen your stories posted.

Aww I know. My heart broke for Sucre at the end of Season 3. He really is like a little puppy.
Clair de Lune: text - i knowclair_de_lune on June 15th, 2009 05:19 pm (UTC)
Same here! Never imagined I would write it, especially incestuous slash. But someone prompted me for a fic in French and I got caught in it *shrugs*

Oh yes all slash is super wrong but so right at the same time!
Oh, I wouldn't say that *all* slash is wrong: the Michael/Lincon variety is for obvious reasons, and Gretchen/Sara is definitely twisted for a different kind of reason (and this is why we enjoy them, don't we?) but otherwise... no worries. Actually, it's more an issue of pairings than slashiness.

All the formatting and posting stuff is not so fun so I can understand that you're behind when it comes to update, especially if you have a fic counting *30* chapters!

Yes, I'm on prisonbreakfic.net as well, but contrary to you, I prefer to post in my LJ. More comfy and personal. So my stories usually end up on pbfic.net days after I've posted them here *facepalm*

Edited at 2009-06-15 06:59 pm (UTC)
Julesdarkwriter69 on June 16th, 2009 02:58 pm (UTC)
Scrumptious. I just love this pairing - it just feels so easy and angst-free.
Clair de Lune: pb - sucreclair_de_lune on June 16th, 2009 07:48 pm (UTC)
*nods* One probably can write anything in a angsty way, but it still sounds like one one of the happiest, easiest relationships in the series.

Scrumptious? I like the word :p

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it :)
amodalie: went blueamodalie on June 16th, 2009 09:07 pm (UTC)
What a nice follow up to the other ficlet! Very clever timing and playing around with minutes and seconds. The two of them kissing in the car, in a rather uncomfortable position, Sucre head over heels and afraid of being caught - such a sweet picture! ♥

And of course I like the Michael/Lincoln references. Even though they're curt it is very clear that Michael still feels a longing for his brother he knows he shouldn't have. And Linc? He so knows what's going on!
Clair de Lune: pb - lincolnclair_de_lune on June 18th, 2009 06:38 pm (UTC)
*nods* One probably can write anything in a angsty way, but it still sounds like one one of the happiest, easiest relationships in the series.

I did my best to keep the Michael/Lincoln reference light because I didn't want to to imply that Sucre was being 'used' (*pets Sucre*) but a tiny allusion can't hurt, can it? *g*

Lincoln definitely knows what's going on. But after the way he angsted in the sister fic, he deserved that tiny comeback at Michael :-p
Nora: Notre Dame across the Seineputu2sleep on June 20th, 2009 04:16 am (UTC)
This seemed so much happier, lighter, maybe even spirit-lifting, compared to the first one. Maybe it's because Lincoln is an outsider here, and his feelings aren't so easily read.

He seems to be more accepting, like he's crossed that bridge, dealt with it, and moved on. I'm not sure how I feel about that.

But the story? It was a delight to read.

I'm desperately behind in reading...I'm working on a little story that is totally out of my element, so it's taking much longer than I expected.

BTW: I took this pic, too. It is probably my favorite from my whole trip (over 800 photos!)
Clair de Lune: pb - michael2clair_de_lune on June 20th, 2009 02:12 pm (UTC)
I meant Lincoln's remark to be brotherly teasing, without necessarily implying he's okay with the relationship, but you have a point. Even though at the end of On the Fence, Michael sounded rather at peace with the situation, I wrote it a while ago and there may very well be glitches in the tone bewteen the two stories.

I'm happy you enjoyed the story itself nonetheless.

Am I nosy if I ask whether you're writing a fanfic for PB or another show, or original fiction? Either way, good luck with it.

The picture is beautiful. I'm helpless with a camera, so I admire!
Noraputu2sleep on June 21st, 2009 01:53 am (UTC)
I am working on an original story, but I took a break to write a story for Marilyn's b-day (shhh...don't tell her :}). It is PB, but so different than I usually write, I am struggling to finish in time. Of course, it doesn't help that I expected ~3,000 words, and I have already passed 6,000!
Clair de Lune: ecriture1clair_de_lune on June 21st, 2009 06:08 pm (UTC)
*zips lips*

Of course, it doesn't help that I expected ~3,000 words, and I have already passed 6,000!
*g* Fics spinning out of my control is something familiar but it looks yours is seriously getting out of hand ;-)