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16 January 2009 @ 09:10 pm
Prison Break - Something about Jane  
Title: Something about Jane
Author: clair_de_lune
Characters: Sara/Jane
Category: Slash
Summary: There’s something about Jane... (Season 4, slightly AU)
Rating: R
Word Count: 200
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Author’s Note: Written for pbhiatus_fic Dirty Double Drabbles Challenge.


There’s something about Jane.

Maybe it’s the way she confidently strolled into the warehouse and offered her help.

Maybe it’s because she causally stripped off of her grimy clothes right before Sara to shrug on a clean shirt.

Maybe it’s the way her warm hand patted Sara’s bare shoulder, sympathetically but without any pity, when she caught a glimpse of the scars on her back.

Maybe there’s something about Sara wanting something that will be hers and not sharable with the boys in the next room – none of the boys.

Whatever it is, it has Sara writhing under the spray in the small shower booth as Jane kneels between her legs and kisses her inner thighs. Fingers, lips, tongue, a hint of teeth, and Sara’s scrapping at the tiled wall, gripping the plastic curtain, panting and moaning. A teasing “Shhh... they’re going to hear you,” only makes her louder.

The tepid water washes away sweat and remaining traces of arousal, but more obvious marks of what’s just happened are still on display – bright eyes, ragged breathing, pink cheeks.

There’s something about Jane that makes Sara help her up and whisper against her lips, “Let see if they can hear you.”

~o~


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Jan 16, 2009

End notes: I’ve had the “There’s something about Jane” line in a Word file for months. Except it was supposed to be about Lincoln. Sorry, Lincoln ^_^
 
 
Current Mood: pensivepensive
 
 
 
sassy, classy, and a bit smart-assy: LincBangbangbadboy_fangirl on January 16th, 2009 11:15 pm (UTC)
I feel sorry for Lincoln too...

But maybe he can join the girls?

*blinks* What? You're way into threesomes lately.
Clair de Lune: pb - lincolnclair_de_lune on January 17th, 2009 02:41 pm (UTC)
Don't tempt me! I've already fic-spammed with this challenge and I have another drabble to post before the deadline.

Feel free to write it though *g*

What? You're way into threesomes lately.
In my own defense, none is of the F/F/M kind - yet ;-)
michele659: M/A kiss memichele659 on January 17th, 2009 08:12 am (UTC)
I really loved this! It was very sexy,and I like the pairing of Jane and Sara.
I loved Jane's character and wish we'd have seen more of her.
Linc can go back to Sofia-he won't be lonely.
And in my head,Michael and Alex belong together-so Michael will be ok:)
Clair de Lune: pb - janeclair_de_lune on January 17th, 2009 02:41 pm (UTC)
Lincoln and Sofia? Michael and Mahone? *clicks tongue disapprovingly* No way!! ;-)
I'm with you about Jane. This is crazy to like so much a character we saw only in a couple of episodes, huh?

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I'm glad you liked this :D
nefeliciousssnefeliciousss on January 17th, 2009 03:27 pm (UTC)
Love Sarah's last line! Nc job keep it up!
Clair de Lune: pb - sara3clair_de_lune on January 17th, 2009 06:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you :D

Edited at 2009-01-17 06:21 pm (UTC)
happy is as happy does: Jane P. - Prison Break (like whoa)happywriter06 on January 17th, 2009 07:24 pm (UTC)
There is someting about Jane.

You can always make it up to Linc!
Clair de Lune: pb - lincolnclair_de_lune on January 18th, 2009 12:32 pm (UTC)
You can always make it up to Linc!
By having him walk in on the two of them, maybe? :p
*shakes head* I'm done writing threesomes. For now.

Thanks for commenting ;)
tokenblkgirl: Prison Break: mike and linctokenblkgirl on January 18th, 2009 07:33 am (UTC)
Loved it, and I liked the hint of playfulness underneath all the sexy. Very nice. :)
Clair de Lune: pb - sara3clair_de_lune on January 18th, 2009 12:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I wanted to keep it quite light.
Um *ponders angsty femslash...*
i want this to last foreverlinzi20 on January 18th, 2009 02:01 pm (UTC)
*gulps*
Clair de Lune: pb - janeclair_de_lune on January 18th, 2009 02:35 pm (UTC)
Thanks :D

It's the good kind of 'gulps', huh? o_O
Genevieve: oops by sezmsgenevieve on January 29th, 2009 12:13 pm (UTC)
Phew. Nice one!

Oh, and even your porny drabbles have a plot. *fangirls you*
Clair de Lune: pb - sara3clair_de_lune on January 30th, 2009 11:41 am (UTC)
A plot in a PWP? Ewww!

Thanks a lot ;) *blushes at being fangirled*